Be careful, the hip bones/pelvis belt is too flat and small, it should curve a bit more (and it has to reach the navel's level in height, at 5/8 line of the body's proportions), same goes for the ribcage, it looks flat.
I really love the guy's face and the broom flying girl, and overall the gestures are good.
Oh Man, thank you so much for the comment... seems I?m not that bad LOL And thanks for the pointers about the skeleton, I need to draw more of those to get the hang...
Like the solid feel and the volume of the shapes.
ReplyDeleteBe careful, the hip bones/pelvis belt is too flat and small, it should curve a bit more (and it has to reach the navel's level in height, at 5/8 line of the body's proportions), same goes for the ribcage, it looks flat.
I really love the guy's face and the broom flying girl, and overall the gestures are good.
-Yuffa from HF
Oh Man, thank you so much for the comment... seems I?m not that bad LOL
DeleteAnd thanks for the pointers about the skeleton, I need to draw more of those to get the hang...
I'll PM you this at HF :)